PIeces of Me
Pieces of Me I am a puzzle half built with a clutter of missing pieces scattered about the floor; I am an unfinished picture disjointed by the cracks and faults that for so long have defined me But a...
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Love the passion in this Jan, if i had to have someone put me together it would definitely have to be jus like this.. love it my friend. so very well done.
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Jan, Simply wonderful creation here! The imagery is just great. You 'pieced' it all together with poetic perfection. *hugs* Cathy
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Lovely work, Jan. I love this ending stanza. Isn't that great to find the hand that will recollect all the scattered pieces.
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Very skilfully and tastefully done Jan... a whole new dimesnion to puzzle making. Regards, Maryse
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Jan, Wow...love this work! Enjoyed the theme and the intent behind it! Applause...standing!
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Ken, you make me smile Thanks! I'm glad to know you liked this one so much
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Every piece of this is simply magnificent, dear friend!! So very well put together!
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But a piece here and a piece theredoes not make a wholeand you do not see the fragments of me,nor do you define meby my omissions,you see the sum of my partsand you delight in assembling meone piece...
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Sasha, thank you! I'm grinning ear to ear that you like this oe so much. I was just thining yesterday that I would like to try reading some of my poems, but I have no idea where my kids took off with...
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Jan, To have someone to make your puzzle whole is one of the greatest treasures in life. Often that person is the missing piece, in retrospect:) Bravo, you made a beautiful verse. I read it with great...
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Ingrid, you are so right, that person IS the missing piece Thanks so mcuh for stopping byto read this, and I'm glad you enjoyed it
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Jan, Some poems are just for entertainment, but every now and then you read a poem that has an essential part of life as we know it captured within itself. This is one of those poems....truly...
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